I will write my biography in a first person diary style to make it more realistic and have more empathy for the protagonist. I will separate my story into several different sections, to show how different the life was when each event happened. Each event is going to be separated by a few days so it wouldn’t be too repetitive. My character’s name is going to be a boy in Myanmar called: Khine Chankrisna (translated to mean “Firm Tree”). His dad’s name is: Hla Thet Myaing (translated to mean “Beautiful Calm Forest”). His mum’s name is: Thant Kyi Nanda (translated to mean “Clean Clear River”).
Part 1: Life in Peace.
Here we find Khine Chankrisna telling his normal daily life with his family. His family are farmers, where they live poor, but peaceful and happy. We find him telling about farming and his normal chores where he help out his parents.
Part 2: The Unexpected Turn.
This time, we find how Khine Chankrisna gets captured and how his parents died. He will tell how his sister and himself got captured by the army and how he got into servitude. This part will be a bit violent as the army will burn down houses and kill off their parents. They will be locked up by the army until they want to join the army. He then was forced to make a pact that he will do the best he can otherwise the army will kill him.
Part 3: Training in Hell.
Khine starts his army training and he gets treated very atrociously. He gets treated as an adult even though his body structure is not as developed yet. In this part, he also learns that his sister is a servant and a slave for the army and this builds up his anger.
Part 4: The Recruitment.
This part Khine will be forced to start recruiting more child soldiers and killing off parents. Here the face the fear by "drinking the victim's blood", a tradition by the army to make them not afraid of killing.
Part 5: The War.
Khine participated in a war against an opposition army in Myanmar called the Shan State Army and he loses one of his leg when he stepped on a mine. No-one stops to help him and he ended up dragging himself towards the opposition, hoping that they will accept him. But it wasn't his lucky day, the Shan State Army got captured while some of them got killed. Khine was caught trying to co-operate with them so he got re-captured by the Burmese army. While they were in jail, he swore to exact revenge on the Army. While in jail, he found a piece of paper and found out the jail was actually built by other slaves. They hid the paper which shows the secret exit. He then starts to formulate a plan and decides to exact vengeance on the army.
By showing how Khine was treated, I can link to how many Human Rights were broken. I also might put in how his father has previously told him the lives of other people on the planet, which may lead Khine to think how come they have things like freedom and justice while he doesn't. I will look back to my research and see which Human Rights I can put in there that were violated.
By the way, this is a rough plan. I might deduct and add somethings while I'm writing.
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