Saturday, 18 June 2011

Slave Diary Entry 4

Please read the earlier ones to know the full story (well some of the full story) :)

Slave Diary Entry 4

2 comments:

  1. Extremely well detailed You Zhen, You included some of the tortures they did and also wrote how your character felt about what was going on. And when you give characters emotions; It makes the characters more realistic and believable.

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  2. Thanks! :D Any points of improvement?

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